Limerick: Positively More!

[readingrat]

Inspired by the Positively House/Wilson challenge, but well below the word limit for that challenge

A doctor created by Shore
Found sex with his girlfriends a bore,
So he went to bed
With his best friend instead.
"Oh my goodness," he said. "Gimme more!"

Comments

[deelaundry.livejournal.com]

My favorite thing about this is that "he" could be either Wilson or House. <3 <3 <3

[readingrat.livejournal.com]

Heh, initially it bothered me, but I'm fine with it now.

[yarroway.livejournal.com]

This is funny and just adorable. :D

[readingrat.livejournal.com]

Thanks :)

[menolly-au.livejournal.com]

Oh, that's brilliant - I love it!

[readingrat.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[blackmare.livejournal.com]

LOL

This is perfect! <3 <3 <3

[readingrat.livejournal.com]

Thanks.

[flywoman.livejournal.com]

Love it! Especially how "he said" in the last line rhymes with the previous two lines.

[readingrat.livejournal.com]

Uh, and that's where I have to admit that the rhyme you mention is entirely a coincidence. But thank you anyway.