i don't know why i was anticipating a cancellation of the wedding. i agree with flywoman. it's a comedy, and one derived from a Shakespearian play. so a wedding is practically a requirement of the story.
as much as i love the House/Cuddy plot in Twelve Days, for me the House minions' sub-plot (plotting) is gold. they really are mini-Houses. as for Lucas, in season 6 he felt less like a real character and more like a plot device for Cuddy's development. the way he is written by fandom, i believe is a reflection of the latter's attitude (conscious or not) towards Cuddy. i mean there is only so much villainy one can endow Lucas before one starts asking how stupid/insane/desperate Cuddy was in thinking she can actually build a life with him.
i'm glad you wrote Lucas as a jerk who is manipulative enough to mean that he is intelligent in his own way. but he can't win against House(who is the most incredible man Cuddy will ever know). your Lucas at least was entertaining.
i suppose the writing process is its own reward, but still i feel that your stories deserve more feedback than it got. i enjoyed Twelve Days and i hope to read more stories from you.
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Date: 2010-09-25 09:59 am (UTC)as much as i love the House/Cuddy plot in Twelve Days, for me the House minions' sub-plot (plotting) is gold. they really are mini-Houses. as for Lucas, in season 6 he felt less like a real character and more like a plot device for Cuddy's development. the way he is written by fandom, i believe is a reflection of the latter's attitude (conscious or not) towards Cuddy. i mean there is only so much villainy one can endow Lucas before one starts asking how stupid/insane/desperate Cuddy was in thinking she can actually build a life with him.
i'm glad you wrote Lucas as a jerk who is manipulative enough to mean that he is intelligent in his own way. but he can't win against House(who is the most incredible man Cuddy will ever know). your Lucas at least was entertaining.
i suppose the writing process is its own reward, but still i feel that your stories deserve more feedback than it got. i enjoyed Twelve Days and i hope to read more stories from you.