I've not reviewed yet, but I've been avidly reading along. I felt I needed to read back a bit, especially to recall Pete and Cuddy's history. It still rankles to hear Pete think of Cuddy as Lisa.
I was glad to see Pete berate himself for the mad dash to stop the proposal. I don't think Cuddy would ever accept a proposal from Wilson. Even for Joel. I'm at a bit of a loss as to Pete's motives. Is he so enamoured with his son that he doesn't want Cuddy adopting him? This rings false to me. Pete getting Wilson's girlfriend pregnant is right in character. Him caring what happens to the boy less so. Pete on the outside looking in on the tour of the "solid" house was enlightening. Thank you for continuing this wonderful tale. Oh, and I look forward to Nolan!
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Date: 2015-09-06 02:13 am (UTC)Cuddy's history. It still rankles to hear Pete think of Cuddy as Lisa.
I was glad to see Pete berate himself for the mad dash to stop the proposal. I don't think Cuddy would ever accept a proposal from Wilson. Even for Joel. I'm at a bit of a loss as to Pete's motives. Is he so enamoured with his son that he doesn't want Cuddy adopting him? This rings false to me. Pete getting Wilson's girlfriend pregnant is right in character. Him caring what happens to the boy less so. Pete on the outside looking in on the tour of the "solid" house was enlightening. Thank you for continuing this wonderful tale. Oh, and I look forward to Nolan!