You're welcome! Glad you don't think I'm just a big buttinsky. I figured the fic was fair game for concrit while it was still on your website rather than posted formally to a community. And I wouldn't bother if I weren't enjoying it a great deal for the most part!
I absolutely understand why you want to keep within the confines of the play - my RL beta and I had a big discussion about this recently when the Cuddy character in "A Single Man" wouldn't behave. I was thinking that you could still use House's musings to recap the past few days' events and explain his pessimism, just in a compressed format. (And, sorry, but what do you mean by "warming up any part of this fic"?)
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Date: 2010-09-18 09:27 pm (UTC)I absolutely understand why you want to keep within the confines of the play - my RL beta and I had a big discussion about this recently when the Cuddy character in "A Single Man" wouldn't behave. I was thinking that you could still use House's musings to recap the past few days' events and explain his pessimism, just in a compressed format. (And, sorry, but what do you mean by "warming up any part of this fic"?)