This is a great line: "He can feel waves of compassion rolling off Wilson and has to fight the urge to barricade himself in his car to escape drowning in them."
House's musings are very... long. Personally I like your take on what transpires after the kiss - I would fully expect House to be exhausted and sore and ill after his exertions, not the sex machine that the season premiere is probably going to give us. But the recap does break up the story and is in such a different style that it felt to me like it didn't really fit. I wonder if you would consider summarizing the events very briefly and using what you've written as a standalone or part of a different fic? (Although Mind Your Own Business, Who Do You Think You Are? would certainly be a legitimate response.)
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House's musings are very... long. Personally I like your take on what transpires after the kiss - I would fully expect House to be exhausted and sore and ill after his exertions, not the sex machine that the season premiere is probably going to give us. But the recap does break up the story and is in such a different style that it felt to me like it didn't really fit. I wonder if you would consider summarizing the events very briefly and using what you've written as a standalone or part of a different fic? (Although Mind Your Own Business, Who Do You Think You Are? would certainly be a legitimate response.)