Oh, frick! I'm caught somewhere between, "Oh, no! Have to edit the chapter on LJ, AO3 and ff.net!" and, "Thank goodness I didn't write a 100 k-word road trip, otherwise I'd have to go through each and every chapter to find stray 'motorbikes!"

No, no. Because a lot of it is from Pete's perspective it is fine in lots of places. But just where Wilson is speaking/thinking. And honestly, you can forget about it if want. I think most fans are like myself and just so grateful for a new, interesting House fic still being written! :)