A nice descriptive chapter. I loved the idea of them both in leather and driving around. And I cringed when House wiped out, having driven a motorcycle for a time myself in my younger days. I am glad they lucked out by hitting a car owned by a sweet guy - neither needs trouble right now (well, anymore trouble than they all ready have). :) I am so pleased that House is on major manipulation path. And a baby Wilson on the way. Interesting development!
If I can make one tiny suggestion? Switch to calling it a motorcycle when Wilson is talking or thinking, not a motorbike. Pete could easily call it motorbike of course, but Wilson would not. In the US, motorbikes are dirt bikes (like for the sport of motocross), not motorcycles. Anyway, just throwing that thought out there. :)
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Date: 2014-05-09 02:34 am (UTC)If I can make one tiny suggestion? Switch to calling it a motorcycle when Wilson is talking or thinking, not a motorbike. Pete could easily call it motorbike of course, but Wilson would not. In the US, motorbikes are dirt bikes (like for the sport of motocross), not motorcycles. Anyway, just throwing that thought out there. :)